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You’re in the first-class on your way to hell,
And you like the way it feels.
If I died tonight, would you still laugh and take your pills?

Hey, I saw you crying when I opened the door,
There was blood in the bathtub,
There was blood on the floor,
I liked to watch it back then but now I’m crazy,

Crazy in love, like a devil.

Be the first to talk and the last to die,
Tonight we change places.
I’ll be six feet underground before you can even scream my name,
Baby, do you miss me yet?
Because that’s all I really wanted, I’ve been waiting oh so long,
You’re fucking loveless, you’re fucking wrong,
And when you find out I’m insane, will you fight it? (will you fight it?)

I bet you were just looking to score,
That night you brought me home, left me searching for the meaning of life in a toilet bowl,
I bet you were just looking for a toy,
Someone to play House with once in awhile.


Game over, I lose.


Thanks for the scars and the scratches down my back,
The addictions and the hurt in my eyes,
Thanks for lending me the knife I used to kill you with,


Ha ha ha you look kinda funny laying there all alone...

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  • photoretinas
    November 17, 2008

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    I dig it.

    "left me searching for the meaning of life in a toilet bowl"
    "thanks for the scars and the scratches down my back"

    ...strong. the whole poem is.
    I like the part about playing house too. the whole thing seems very abusive and harsh.


  • Edited
    October 31, 2008

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    some extremely intense emotions surround this write.
    Its backed with power, strength and fear.
    intense.

  • MyZeroForever
    October 25, 2008
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    what is this?