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what we make of
when riches dazzle around
with star studded sky open
sparkling rivers quenching our thirst

birds do not covet
live for a day
but we hoard
what we do not need
suffering next door neighbor

there is no let up
we exploit,
women, children and weak
we are exploited in turn
this is,
history crusing through
repeating again and again
though we tinker with reforms often

when will this end
struggle within and without
free our shackles
share and sustain resourses
leaving the world
with residues of love and affection





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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    October 27, 2008

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    How sadly true your thoughts here. Beautiful expression of the dark side of humanity. Thank you so much for sharing this.


    Az


  • October
    October 26, 2008

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    This provoked much thought
    as I read with contemplation.
    I appreciate the thoughtfulness
    put into this
    Great write
    good luck in the contest