polluted and stained
echoing the glass-eyed look
of a withered heart.
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kurgle [may i ask what it means haha]
inspired by the prompt: glass
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I like how this is a senryu but it seems like you incorporated bits of nature into it. the image is quite well penned. good job and good luck in the contest!
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polluted and stained
echoing the glass-eyed look
of a withered heart.
Purely awesome. I love what you done here
Thank you for entering
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Wonderful!
Fantastic imagery -
sensual
speaks volumes in few words
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Very powerful and moving write. You have conveyed so much meaning and emotion through your words, it takes a great poet to do that! This is an extraordinary write, I love the whole idea of it! thanks so much for entering the contest, best of luck in it!
Chin up,
Summer Moon xx -
With such truth
i so loved this,good luck in the contest!
blessings
Rend
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amazing
seriously
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Beautiful! Very nice, very heartfelt! I LOVE IT!
Kurgle is a made up word (by me
) It's a dialect. I make up words and add them. Like Turtlegon (yes, the capital letter goes) it's a color.
And... shiackaimanek. It's how I feel right now. (shee-ack-ee-ma-neck)
Good luck in the contest!
Naoto
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ooh I love all the words you used.
immobile is an AWESOME title.
and I love the words stained, glass-eyed and heart.
this is just so gorgeous
and I love the background -
Very deep!!!!!!!! I like this one!!!!! Best wishes in this contest!!!!!!
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