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Putting the Pieces Together

10/25/08
[[Day One]]
Responsibility she lacks
Forcing words upon me
I'm screaming back
From evident to unperceived
One day she'll see

10/26/08
[[Day Two]]
Shes lost
I can't find her
My other half
Vanished
Just anger remains

10/27/08
[[Day Three]]
Head is pounding
Heart is racing
Stomach is turning
Time is wasting
Another day, another aliment

10/28/08
[[Day Four]]
Lips against my cheek
Blushing red, me?
My hand holds another
Embraced by arms
Is this another crush?

10/29/08
[[Day Five]]
Fake smiles by day
Honest tears by night
Her fears swallow her
Simply put...
She loves him.

10/30/08
[[Day Six]]
Two days till my doom
I'm gonna look like...
a flower in bloom
Puffy, pink, maybe beautiful,
I don't think so.

10/31/08
[[Day Seven]]
How lovely this holiday,
children running for candy,
all adorned in costumes,
but i remain here,
because time is up.

10/01/08
[[Day Eight]]
You, me, dance floor
A dangerous combo
We were animals unleashed
And for one moment
I fell in love

10/02/08
[[Day Nine]]
Your gone now
Back to your home
Leaving me to cry
I swear to you...
I LOVE YOU!

10/03/08
[[Day Ten]]

Author notes

Sorry I'm entering so late...I'd love comments...and to my friends, you know the story...

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  • piggyback
    November 15, 2008

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    This is quite a well-put together diary, like you were chronicling only one or two certain aspects and their development. Nice little way of seeing into your life for a bit. Thanks for your entry.