Feel my heart beating?
my eyes staring into yours
green and brown
blue and grey
they dance
into the night
Feel my cheeks blushing?
your smile makes it so
the hapiness there strong
too strong for my mind to take
I was defenceless
to your love
So leave me broken
I don't deserve you
the little girl
needs to grow up
In a list
A contest entry
- Santuary Of Words... by SummerlandRayne.
750 points, ended November 6, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I fell off the face of the earth D: by Jasmine Rayne.
1000 points, ended November 2, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Easy Points!!!!!!!! by Kathraina.
675 points, ended January 4, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very good (a couple spelling errors)
Flowed really well. Good luck in the contest ^.^
♥ Kathraina -
Wonderful write...so warm and loving. A journey inside a kind heart. Thanks for sharing.
Az
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'Tip of the iceberg' is a great title
for this, because It left me with
the impression that there is much more
to the story, though you hinted
to the depths ,which allowed
my imagination to soar...
Fantastic work
Good luck in the conest
and thank you for sharing.
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