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The Beginning of His Life

"Wait for me!" She yelled after him.

"Then, hurry up, you're slowing me down." Even though, in his heart, he knew that no matter how slow she was, he could never leave her behind.

She was his best friend and tonight he would make her his life, one way or another, he would tell her.

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  • worshipchick
    October 28, 2008
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    Ooh, I like this. Nice contrasts and use of language. Good write. :-) Thanks for entering!