Double ring ceremony began,
talk explained roles of two.
Woman was a complement to man
from this day on their life was anew.
Time came to take their vows
rose and held each others hands.
Father was asked if he allows
“Yes” with a smiles he stands.
As they are pronounced man and wife.
Embracing with a hug and kiss,
Arm and arm they face their new life
Happy in their wedded bliss…
Author notes
Prompt: Love,Love,Love
In a list
A contest entry
- Love, Love, Love by Wolven Roses.
700 points, ended November 27, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very nice. sweet and gentle. it flows well with a good rhyme. thanks.
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very sweet I like it.
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Well wrote!
Best of wishes for you inthe contest.
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