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Butterfly Effect

A flutter-breath of shaky truth
laid waste to what was solid.
What once stood proud and beautiful
now incomplete and squalid.

Broken word bent on the wind...
a boomerang of death.
Poison from the womb of lies
on fluttering, shaky breath.

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  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    October 31, 2008

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    Wow! What a message you have brought here in this piece. Thank you for sharing this with us. ~~Iridessa~~

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 26, 2008

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    I like this and can relate I love the last stanza sums up my life right now thanks for sharing best wishes always be well


    • Rowan Oak
      October 26, 2008
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      oh no!I wouldn't want that to be the stanza to sum up anyone's life...let alone yours. I love you!