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Oh GOD

my body is the temple
your touches just divine
beneath the sheets
is heaven
let us worship at the shrine
our passion knows no measure
our orgasms rock the hall
within that bit of pleasure
even atheists sound the call

OH GOD

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  • KayJay
    October 25, 2008

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    LOL - How marvelous and creative. . . and the ending is both inspired and hilarious. May you "worship" often

    Ken


  • Dalaney gold member
    October 25, 2008

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    "even atheists sound the call...oh God"

    A wonderful ending to a very well written entry. Thank you.
    Love, Lane