The cant of his head,
the prominence of his brow
called out to me as we passed,
and thoughts of you danced
in my head once more.
A contest entry
- striking a chord by going nowhere.
1500 points, ended October 25, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I am so tickled to have won gold!! It is so hard to tell what judges would like to see. Thank you for seeing the worth in my work and for holding this contest.
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there are so many things that can make us think of someone else, especially someone that is special to us. thank you.
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Good write
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