Would that I knew the tongues of Elves
That I might wake the time-worn trees.
For I've a thirst for mysteries
I think their stories could apease.
A contest entry
- Santuary Of Words... by azlyn.
750 points, ended November 6, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A delightful poem with a wonderful premise. I like the way you have structured these few words to paint a word picture of possibilities. Well done dear poet!
Write On!
Dennis
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Such a cool poem, full of the lovely mysteries of the forest we want to know more about. A quiet sanctuary of peace within your words.
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Bravo
You may not speak the tongues of Elves,
Their words are scared on the breeze,
That they have hallowed there themselves,
You may not speak such words as these!
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A creative and enchanting piece of poetry. I loved this.
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So magical!!! What mysteries we could learn from the Elves...this is enchanting! Thanks for sharing!
Az
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This is fantastic
I love the feeling of enchantment
you left me with...
Good luck in the contest
and thank you for sharing
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