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water cascading

water cascading
splashing on rocks far below
rainbows in the mist

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"kurgle"

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    December 16, 2008

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    Beautiful!

    This is the perfect Haiku! I'm surprised this only garnered an HM. Traditional count, perfect flow & so vivid! Bravo poet.


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    What tranqulity!

    lovely take on this, sweet!
    good luck on the contest!

    Rend


  • DogFish silver member
    November 1, 2008

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    ...you take me back to Niagara Falls where there are rainbows upon rainbows upon rainbows in the roar of the thundering waters!


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    October 26, 2008
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    lovey piece of poetry!!!!  Best wishes in the contest!


  • Mgreen
    October 25, 2008
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    "Rainbows in the mist," a lovely image Simply Beautiful!


  • Freak-in-BlackJeans
    October 25, 2008

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    This is very beautiful I love it! It is so nice and it was very well made.

    Good luck in the contest!

    Naoto

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