While setting up camp, my daughter made a new friend.
Excited clasping her friend by the hand, She came running up
Mommy , mommy I have a friend from Jupiter and she speaks Jupe!
The child was from Germany they communicated very well for three days.
Without speaking English or German.
A contest entry
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760 points, ended October 28, 2008, 16 entries
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Excellent write
So shall we learn from ur children what we often forget through time our own special teachers of love are the chidlren yours and mine .
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...aww, that's so cute...wouldn't it be nice if two adults could engage in a game of hopscotch instead of arguing over silly stuff.
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So very True
Isn't it amazing how kids can communicate without really speaking and predudises
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What can I say she was an exceptional child =) like her mama.
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Kids are awesome. If only adults could communicate in such a way.
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I love children! :-) Great story, good use of space. Thanks for entering!
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A charming piece of truth - that children are wiser than their elders. Delightful.
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Haha...
That is so... funny and cute. From Jupe Haha...
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Children see people as people. They don't see the different colors or hear the different languages. Bravo!
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omg
that's so funny, she speaks "Jupe" - that's about the size of it.
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good job
and the idea you wrote here is true, kids can have a language all there own, they can talk and get along with out language. I've lived overseas enough to have seen it first hand.
enjoyed reading this alot
Rhonda
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This is sweet it made me smile kids do say the cutest things at times thanks for sharing good luck in the contest be well
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That is incredibly sweet and definitely sounds like something a kid would say. "Jupe". ^^ So cute. Good luck in the contest you've entered!
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