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Red Ink

tiny barrette & bow
spilling whispers

red ink
dancing, those
neatly-lined pages
stains--
pressed white collars
& medicine lollipop nuisances

liquid center
feather bites on my tongue
mincing words

and the only thing
that drips
is uncertainty
draw by lip paint

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  • Rheea gold member
    October 27, 2008
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    pain radiates from this it makes tears come to my eyes.

  • Asabouros.
    October 26, 2008
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    hm. I like it.