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Irrelevant



“Look, mom!” she pointed upwards to a moon suddenly splitting, drifting slowly apart.

I rushed to the TV, a livid presenter was being whispered something in her ear. As if keeping up appearances mattered.

I gathered the girls, the dog, rang my husband knowing there was no time for him to reach home. I waited.


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  • Sonja
    October 26, 2008
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  • Night Hope gold member
    October 25, 2008
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    Nothing you say could ever be construed as being irrelevant, my Friend.