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Break my heart

Once upon a time, there was a girl who gave you her heart
Said "please don't break it"
But deep down she knew, from the very start
In choosing you to give her heart to she made a mistake
Because you broke it.

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  • worshipchick
    October 28, 2008

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    Awww... cute story. I like the layout, although I think it would be just as effective written just as prose. Nice work, and thanks for entering!