a fire from sunlight
into morning sea spraying
a fragment wave crash
Author notes
prompt: kurgle
water and glass
A contest entry
- ♥ Haiku Mania ♥ by Freak-in-BlackJeans.
800 points, ended December 16, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Shards that don't hurt!
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This is so nice, it made my brain light up a fire!
This is very nice, and thank you for following the rules. I felt warmness when I know I should have felt numb and coldness.
Good job, good luck in the contest!
Naoto
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thank you
Thank you for the wonderful comment given. Haley27 -
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no problem!
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