As the sun sets on a quiet world
The sky turns into black indigo
The crickets chirp their last lamentation
To opressive humidity
So now the times has come for you to
Concentrate on past times
Every creative postulation
Has to reappear sometime
So may that time be now
Upon this peceful unshaken world
A creative heart my fly again one more time
To tell the word what you want it to know
Maybe its just enough
For people to see
So now the sun has gone away
Now the night creatures rejoice over their sustenence
A dark warm embrace
And now creativity will sleep for one more night
A little blue star in the sky
Author notes
This is a poem that is inspired from Amera's expressions. Writing poetry about the expressions of other authors is one of my favorite artistic ventures.
A contest entry
- Santuary Of Words... by SummerlandRayne.
750 points, ended November 6, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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This is truly fantastic
I was enthralled from beginning
to end, although the entire poem
spoke to me, I would have to say
my favorite lines are--
"So now the sun has gone away
Now the night creatures rejoice over their sustenence
A dark warm embrace"
This left a lasting impression
Good luck in the contest
and thank you for sharing
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How beautiful...sounds like a new beginning. Sings of hope and faith. Very lovely write...thank you for sharing!
Az
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