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The Window and the Bill.




There once lived a man named Joe Pucket
Packed a stone and man could he chuck it!
When a window he broke
He yelled up to the bloke
Just bill me, I'm Joe from Nantucket!


Author notes

Just another tale of the good old man from Nantucket

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  • Mirthryl
    November 4, 2008
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    *Groan* Here I thought he had a chance for Olympic gold in the discus throw, and he underachieves as a noisy vandal! *sigh*
    I really enjoyed your title, particularly if the resident was Bill--if he 'Bill'ed Joe, perhaps the altercation would provide an entertaining second verse!