Ave Maria
Sanctus
Sanctus
White marble hallways echo the litanies of a time gone by
when holy feet trod sacred cloisters
Heads bowed low in quiet contemplation
Ave Maria
Sanctus
Sanctus
Gentle litanies plead mankinds sorrow
Candles glow irredenscent flames
Incense burning prayers ascending
Holy deeds Holy contemplation
Sanctuary of Holy Words
Ave Maria
Sanctus
Sanctus
In a list
A contest entry
- Santuary Of Words... by SummerlandRayne.
750 points, ended November 6, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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wonderful
'White marble hallways echo the litanies of a time gone by';
wish you well in your contest.
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This really does read like
a prayer and I love the repetition.
This left me feeling inspired
and contemplative.
Good luck in the contest
and thank you for sharing
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october
thank you for your generous words. i am very moved to think that you felt something spiritual.
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This reads as a holy prayer. Very spiritually charged and beautifully worded.
Gentle litanies plead mankinds sorrow
This is a most lovely line...thank you for sharing!
Az
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Thank you so much for your kind comment. I loved writing it.
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