Mirror reflections of
Hearts beating affections
Intertwined within our souls
♥
Rend The Veil
Author notes
"kurgle"
A contest entry
- ♥ Haiku Mania ♥ by Freak-in-BlackJeans.
800 points, ended December 16, 2008, 41 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This was great. I love the picture also. Very beautiful.
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You are so Talented!
you manage to convey a wealth of images with these spare, very well chosen words, awesome!!!
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thank you Sheli,
i just write my thoughts, there are other here that are worthy of that comment but not me, thank you my sweet Treasure
Bless you
Rend
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Wow. You write everything, don't you! I love this Haiku. So very beautiful. I also adore the way you present your peices to the reader, not only is the poem by itself a marvel, but the font you chose, the colors and the layout just adds to the whole feel. See. What'd I tell you? TALENT!
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Ylova
thank you for stopping by and commenting!
Blessings
Rend
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Beautiful haiku. Love the pic.
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Thank you
for your comment! and they are always apreciated!
Rend
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Love it!
I didn't know if this was 'Haiku' or not because of the count [I try to be 'traditional' when writing] but nonetheless this is a wonderful poem! All the best in the Contest! Your pix accompanies this beautifully!
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Thank you Kathleen
your comments are always welcomed!
Rend
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a haiku, haven't tried one, but this is very pretty. good to see you branching out.
hope you do well in the contest
Rhonda
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Hey Sis
Your comments are always
apreciated Blessings and love
Rhonda,
Rend
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this is a beautiful little poem! very nice job
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Thank you
For your comment, Blessings as always
Rend
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I love the pic, by the way.
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It is very nice, very beautiful ad I see you have worked very nicely everything into this, it is very pretty.
Please, next time, follow my rules though. If you reread them completely you will see what you left out.
Naoto
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Ah....wow...blowing one away with words...just absolutely awesome haiku! So talented you are in penning this one dear daughter!
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Mom
Encouraging and loving is what you are to me, a blessing
for your comment and thoughts i appreciate
with all my heart Thank you
Love
Rend
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oh how gorgeous sis! I have never done a haiku before but if this is how they can be it sure makes me wanna try. This gives a big sigh!
Love you
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Your Talent
Surpasses mine by leaps and bounds Dear, you can do anything!!!!, thank you so much for your comment,
Blessings
Rend
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Beautifully done. I really liked your haiku! Good luck on the contest and in all things!
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Thank you Bunny
I was in the middle of reading your stories, very deep!
your comments are always aprecitated
Blessings
Rend
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