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Fear.(Hay(na)ku)

Makes
Body shake
Heart, soul break

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  • Kiddy
    October 29, 2008

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    three simple lines, six simple words...but what it means so deep and vivid that I get the real picture of what is fear and how it will eat one's cool...
    Great job,..
    Good luck in the contest
    Love
    Kiddy

  • Asabouros.
    October 25, 2008

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    Hm, I actually kinda like this one, even though it's a little odd...it's quite original. Good job