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playing along

dreaming of that day once more
when it all fell apart
and her dreams collapsed within

she cannot seem to shake that fear
that soon it shall return
is it too late to rewrite destiny?

she changed so much
only to return to what she was?

will you accept her for what she is?
or mock in glee to what she tries to be?
she doesn't wish to dissapoint
but enough time has not passed since that day

so wait a bit longer
and soon you shall be one
just wait a bit longer
for her respect to be regained

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 28, 2008

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    Sad moments in life...we often do things we regret, but the worse is when someone else can not forgive and we stand lost in hope for that second chance...thought provoking words...thank you for entering!
    mystic