An ocean of dreams before me,
warm winds caress my face,
waters that glow of emerald green,
palm trees all sway in their place.
Miles and miles of white sand beach,
all the gulls seem to laugh with glee,
your hand in mine is what matters most,
you are the paradise deep inside of me.
Yellow moon up high sheds it’s fine light,
a trail of sparkling jewels upon the open sea,
arm in arm we dance the dance of lovers,
in this place where our souls have been set free.
Author notes
Love
A contest entry
- Santuary Of Words... by SummerlandRayne.
750 points, ended November 6, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Freewrite, or Prewrite by Tqop.
650 points, ended November 28, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
Comments
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I have to smile. Ok, this was awesome. It really made me think of what your view of paradise is.
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Is that an offer to join you in a very special paradise? If so it sounds wonderful and as long as we can take a walk together it would be great.
Joann
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Lovely images of such peace and splendor...this is a beautiful escape! Thanks for the entry.
Az
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