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Night.Sun

A name can go for anything
But simply to name just one
The great big ball most call the moon
To me is the Night.Sun

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  • Never.Give.Up silver member
    November 5, 2008

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    You've discribed the moon beautifully and I love the name Night.sun its something different.

    I wish you all the best in the contest.

    Rose


  • Beauty Of Silence
    October 26, 2008

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    hahas. yes, you can call the moon that too short and awesome, keep penning