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reflecting your thoughts
transparent dreams in disguise
fragile friendships break
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Author notes
kurgle!
Prompt: Glass
I'm in the OLCFC Online Group 
Okay here's what I want:
-Three line haiku (how many times you press enter doesn't count)
-I want them fresh!
-Dealing with either glass or water
-No StIcKy CaPs or DQ
-No cussing or DQ
-No adult stuff (I'm just 14)
A contest entry
- ♥ Haiku Mania ♥ by Freak-in-BlackJeans.
800 points, ended December 16, 2008, 41 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really like this good job and congrats on the trophy!
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thumbs up
shivers and slivers -
Loved it's
truth, friendships are so delicate,
good luck in the contest!
Blessings
Rend
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This is simply stunning. I am always amazed at how someone can express themselves with a few well chosen words. Well Done!
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A superb Haiku, you have said so much in so few words. Very thought provoking, especially the middle line. A superbly penned write, good luck
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"Transparent dreams in disguise" hmm...very intriguing haiku, and a very very good one..I wish you well in the contest, Bear!
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I love this!!! This is great, I am in love with this, thank you for entering and reading the rules!!!
And for informing me about the group thing.
Good luck in the contest!
Naoto
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God bless....have fun judging......I am honored to have written for this contest.....night!
Bear ~
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very profound words
reflecting your thoughts
alot of truh in that line
fragile friendships break,
friendship without truth
you are talented, you are able to bring together perfectly just a few words or pointers that say so much.
all this from glass
wow
God bless you my friend...
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God bless you!
Thank you so much for stopping by...so nice to see you....I hope you are well and wearing
Bear ~
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