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The Arms of the Fiend

They went for my blocks
and started to spell
A message that surely
was straight from hell
Then pulled back
and I hadn't forseen
The blocks spelled out
"Happy Halloween!"

Author notes

The 30 word limit really hurt =/

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  • Valley Girl silver member
    October 27, 2008

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    Very creative! I like the twist you have added for this write! Thank you for your entry, best of luck in the contest. ♥


  • writex
    October 26, 2008
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    Hah, I love this.
    Creative :]