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Please Remove Boots at the Door


There once was a man from Nantucket
who hauled his manure in a bucket;
with abandon he'd spread
on his plants that weren't dead,
And then, when it rained, he would muck it!


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Prompt: Tell about the Man from Nantucket, in clean limerick.

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  • waydownuponjoy
    November 18, 2008

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    Well done! ...

    I am taking the class for meter and had to come up with three of these limiricks for an assignment. I put off that task forever because I found it difficult! I just submitted them yesterday and am waiting for my grade ... I liked yours alot! jy


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    October 30, 2008

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    I've been to Nantucket - land of the very affluent. Nobody's hauling or spreading manure on farm land there - unless it's a gardener carefully burying it under pristine landscapes.

    Very funny, rhymes well. You managed to make this both clean and dirty.


  • HomeGrown
    October 25, 2008

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    Well done!

    SWEET! I adore it, the picture, the feeling of this old man from Nantucket dripping into the house, tracking manure around... Thanks for the entry, friend.