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Canvas of Sexuality

Sensual touches,
causing embers to ignite.
Fingertips tracing patterns of arousal,
painting  unforbidden desires.

Moist lips place tenderness,
on a canvas alive with eroticism,
drawn together.
A connection of appetites craving completion.
Voracious drives alive,
in tangible explosions creating  multiple waves of pleasure;
as sweat slowly precipitates, trickling amatory sensations.

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Prompt : Sizzle
50 words

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  • Beret55 silver member
    January 15
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    mmmmmmmmmmmmmm i like that..


  • chilali
    December 10, 2008

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    Nice take on the prompt! I loved this. Great work. Keep it flowing.

    Much love
    Ylova


  • Cannonsfire
    October 25, 2008

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    Like this one alot, 'veracious' should be 'voracious' I think but this does tempt one to burn. Thank you for the entry. C


  • Nevel
    October 25, 2008

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    wow um..yeah...whatcha you done last night, hmmmmm? your poem is about a snake, I think...
    unforbidden? A too complicated word I think...you line breaks...hmmm...overall a good write...you know not my favorite subject....so you can my words also see from that point of view. Good uck in the contest


  • Fixsius
    October 25, 2008

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    quick question, what the hell is embers?
    otherwise a good poem, nice writing.

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