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Fridays Are For Lovers

Impatience
A hurtful sin
Finds the unwanted
And brings them in

My hope
Is all for nothing
As I read through
Your linear string

Your words
Soft and sweet
Bore into my heart
And cut so deep

My thoughts
Of what he'd say
If he found out
About that day

Curiousity
Of what could be
If I let us happen
Would others agree?

Author notes

It's what happened Friday night...
The second stanza isn't so good, and I tried to fix it, like, twice already.

Jan 19, 2009: This one happened along with "Tonight You'll Lose Everything Real". It's the same story. Another guy told some "sweet" things to me and because I was so mad with the guy I actually liked, I fell for it. Turned out to be a really, really big mistake. I really, really wish I could go back and see through my anger to make myself realise that he was just saying fake words to pull me in. Never, never, let anger blur your true vision. You'll regret it later, just like me.

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