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Dewdrops

sparkling diamonds     
dangling from the cusps   
-in the early morning light   



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kurgle
I love dawn, especially when it's cold and misty and the birds are singing.

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  • sense surreal gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    oh I love dewdrops and the way you describe them---sparkly
    diamond...and they dangle like blingblings
    I love dawn too
    I love this poem!!!


    Anna Lee


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    sweet take

    Dew drops are like diamonds, great poem!
    Good luck in the contest

    Rend


  • DogFish silver member
    November 1, 2008
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    magical !


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    October 26, 2008

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    I really like this poem...   I also love dawn!!!! I am feeling better and can usually get more done early in the morning!!!!! Best wishes in this contest!!!!1


    • Lee Tai Wah
      October 26, 2008
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      Hi jacbgd2

      Thank you. Looks like there are a number of dawn lovers here.


  • Freak-in-BlackJeans
    October 25, 2008

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    This is so pretty!

    I love the dawn too, and I love the dewdrops!

    In spanish they're called: rocío
    (roh-cee-oh)

    Very pretty! I love it!

    Naoto

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