Lily sheds a tear.
Morning's dew disturbs the pond;
ripples eternal.
Author notes
Kurgle.
Erm, for once I have nothing to note 
A contest entry
- ♥ Haiku Mania ♥ by Freak-in-BlackJeans.
800 points, ended December 16, 2008, 41 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Such a sweet thing ripples are, I remember first really thinking about them when they spoke about them in Pocahontas. Great movie and this kind of actually reminded me of the movie and that one scene. Great haiku, some are just absolutely so well written with such perfect choices of words that you can only read it over and over and over...
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Awe
Yes, perfec.
This poem conjured up a beautiful image with only a few words,
Well done.
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PRETTY!
this is such a short and gorgeous write. its very refreshing!
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Awesome haiku Snail!
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Beautiful Snail
Wow you're poetry is gracefull..
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A beautiful piece, so visual with lots of water, and the surface of the pool like glass.
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bravo
perfect
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"...for once I have nothing to note!"
what could be added?!
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Such a Metaphor!
everything ripples eternal! choices in your life,
cause and effect! good luck in the contest!
Blessings
Rend
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Nice piece!!! I can almost see the ripples in the pond as I read this one!!!!!!!!! Best wishes in the contest!
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This is soooo pretty!!! I love this, it seems dewdrops is everyone's favorite! I love the imagery, pure beauty!
Good luck in the contest!
Naoto
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