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Secrets confessed
I am now laid bare
Exposed for all to see
Acutely aware
That I possess no defense
For ridicule or derisions
Sure to be heaped upon me
Although I am afraid and the
Future is uncertain
I hold fast to the belief
That honesty and truth
Must always
Come First

Author notes

this might make no sense to some of you and then again for some it might. PROMPT NAKED

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  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    Oh i love this...I am now laid bare
    Exposed for all to see...its a scary thing, isn't it? but once the cards are laid out on the table.. relief of some from makes it all worthwhile.
    great write mah sis...!

    becca


  • nevadapoet
    November 11, 2008
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    Excellent...words of wisdom, well penned. An excellent take on the prompt.


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    October 25, 2008

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    Fantastic!

    I love this piece and it makes perfect sense to me. I love the lines "Honesty and truth must always come first" Great write sis. ~Gypsy~

  • nevadapoet
    October 25, 2008

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    a beautiful write with honesty and truth exposing your nakedness. Thank you for the entry to this contest. I appreciate you sharing your take on the word prompt and your talent.
    Shelly


  • Ken-Maverick
    October 25, 2008

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    Honesty and truth are VERY important in all aspects of life my friend.
    Good write you've penned here
    and i do see what you mean

    Ken

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