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Go To Bed

Time for bed, mom said
But I want to play!
Sadly, I jump up,
Ready to turn off my light
Thump! Screech!
Holding him tight,
There's something under my bed!

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Wow, that was hard to just write 30 words!! I tried, and got it. I kinda like the poem, the picture was great!! My 3 year old was watching me, and asked if that monster was going to be under his bed tonight. LOL. This was fun, Thanks!

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  • Valley Girl silver member
    October 25, 2008

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    LOL! This poem made me smile, as well as what you said in your AN lol! Poor lil guy! I like the flow of this and the imagery was great! Thanks for your entry and best of luck in the contest. ♥