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lake as smooth as glass

lake as smooth as glass
not one ripple to be seen
large mouth bass splashes

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575."kurgle"

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  • Freak-in-BlackJeans
    October 25, 2008
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    Okay, thank you for fixing it!

    I really like it, especially the last line, I've always ben interested in bass fishes and stuff. Good write!

    Good luck in the contest!

    Naoto

  • Freak-in-BlackJeans
    October 25, 2008

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    Please follow instructions and reread all the rules again.

    Until you edit this I won't be able to judge this haiku.

    Thank you.