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Night-song

I am night-song you will hear me at night,
I am the darkness when you turn off the light.
Night-song is music that you hear in the dark,
The sweet innocent singing of the lark.

I am night-song listen to me,
I am the morning in the dark that you see.
When I stretch out my wings
Like the pure white dove
I cover the darkness like a glove.

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  • Janice M Pickett
    November 3, 2008

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    Night-Song..ahhh how beautiful and what a lovely message in your poem. You are just such a gentle caring person. I'm so glad I got to read your poems again. I have been so preoccupied with my life lately I have neglected some of my favourites. SORRY.


  • Hello...No.One.Home silver member
    October 25, 2008

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    I lilke how you've put conflicting ideas into the peom to protray what you want.

    Beautiful and I like the name to.

    I wish you all the best in the contest, Rose

  • Mickie27
    October 25, 2008
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    Oops I forgot to put but, you might of guessed the name I suggest is Night-song a combination of nighttime and music.