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Haiku 164

waterfall splashes
into flower lined rock pool
showering small fish

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kurgle

A contest entry

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  • DogFish silver member
    October 31, 2008
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    loverly!


  • Freak-in-BlackJeans
    October 25, 2008
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    Very nice, very pretty, it made me think of a koi pond. I've always wanted a koi pond!
    I drew a painting once that was somewhat like this in art class.

    I see you have followed my indications. Now, Kurgle is a word I made up, it's like a dialect of my own.

    This is very pretty, I thank you for following the rules and entering.

    Good luck in the contest!

    Naoto