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Thrust Of Your Sex (Adult)

Adrenaline pumping,
anticipation teases
dark hardened nipples.


Nectar from ripened fruit

drips it's fragrance,
filling the air like a dense fog.


Stifled moans of yearning
beacon...


Hot breath against
wanting flesh
wild with desire,

needing to touch...

to taste...

to breath in and out...

to be filled up.

 

A sexual hunger only

satisfied by the trust

of your sex!!!

 

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a word prompt: sizzle

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  • Roy Flynn silver member
    October 31, 2008

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    This poem completely flowed, and just kept building up

    The meter you used really got my adrenaline pumping

    Great job, much respect


  • Riamh
    October 26, 2008
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    what can I say? ........fukkin YUMMY


  • jazzcat gold member
    October 25, 2008

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    Nice job. You keep the pace moving with your well-selected words and your rhythm. You paint a picture that is sensual and sultry, but not obscene, which is not always easy to do. I enjoyed this read.


  • Cannonsfire
    October 25, 2008

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    Damn....this ain't sizzle this is dynamite!!!!


  • Dalaney gold member
    October 25, 2008

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    ....something is in the water around here
    everyone is feeling frisky

    love, lane


    • nevadapoet
      October 25, 2008
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      I drank 2 8 oz glasses....I must have gotten too much...lol
      Thanks for the read.

  • Bob Fox
    October 25, 2008

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    Sex

    Oh the constant search for great sex. Sex in the kitchen, sex on the floor, sex with your neighbor, sex out the door. Sex on AP ,poets begging ever more. But sex is not something we refrigerate and store.

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