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Sweet Violet

Upon the purple petals, soft
set a lonely dew drop,
in the morn of the day
sunrise crests
in miraculous flames,
over mountains
delicately swaying, dawned,
so beautiful
amongst the wheat's flow,
her sound of silent joy, seen
to eyes in love with life,
sweet violet gathered in hands
give the smile sent in peace.

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  • Mairi bheag gold member
    November 9, 2008
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    Gentle... a feeling of tenderness in this one.


  • Shakes-spear
    October 25, 2008
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    very nice

    I really like this and it is very poetic! The Shaker