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Parting Gift

 

 

Brown leaves, not unlike lovers
curl and twine in dry beauty,
a fallen nest in her hair -
in the thin snows of the mind, there are
locked away
deep, broken openings,
smothered in darknesses, eager to live

Corpses of coracles, bone-sails,
ammonites, weather-bleached -
such small unspoiled deaths


Eyeless fish captured in clay,
flora that is fauna, stars that opened
and once curled 'round our fingers,
creatures that are vessels, living brains
in the guise of corals,
macroscopically dreaming their brief lives away

Eager mouths and hot throats,
voracious jaws that snap but
catch only phosphorescence and
lost musical notes


She tires of remorselessness
always catching her breath,
cooped up like a magpie in a cage
wanting to open the door and let the dreams come
to allow the bird to hop about under the eaves, free
to scratch at fallen leaves, and drink deeply
                                              of night's raven colours

















Parting Gift
İcrisstiena

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  • zt
    May 28

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    From fallen leaves to fossils, coral to magpies, you weave with such varied thread that it's amazing the tapestry ends up so lovely. Well done


  • Rheea gold member
    October 25, 2008

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    I love this type of poetry though I am not good at it myself. This is beautiful though it does seem unfinished or maybe I just did not want the piece to end so soon.