This is another melancholic reminiscence
Cause your my lovely memory floating on my frozen tears
I'm your coffee stain that tells our stories
I’m your ever tattered attenuating scarlet letter
I recall how
Silently you slither in my dear memories
Never was I any significance in your pleasant life
A mere painted black and white I was to you
Drying in the bitter fortunes of time
I was just your cynical feign of love
I recollect and take bitterly the counsel of my tears
A graceful surrender of slow suicide
You nurtured the sleeping misery in me
Whatever you conceived me to be
You rendered me this noisy confusion of love
The measure of torment you cast upon me
Is of limitless bounds I can never transcend upon
Your exploits has ensnared me with the avenging devils
Doomed to fall upon the wraths of the heavens
Why did you lay this on me, if need be kill me!
Devoured by misery, sorrow and confusion,
if need be then I'll die
I'm attached of our dreadful yesterdays
Resentful of my hollow today
I no longer yearn for a day to come
For you have forever tainted my trivial existence
Author notes
i couldn't decide which phrase to choose, but each phrase gave me an idea, a thought, so can i has chosen the 3 phrase?.. it took me hours to write this Ranji!... bahh i really hope you likez it, cause i suck at writing maybe i should quit, dont you think?
A contest entry
- Phrases :) by Beauty Of Silence.
800 points, ended November 13, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very nice
This reads well. I felt as though I was at a poetry reading and that someone was performing this write. Very nice. Good luck in the contest! The Shaker
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aww!
this poem tells such a sad tale! and.don't.you.dare.quite. i'll bash you up i tell you! anyhoo, back to this poem... i liked this. its like the perfect length for a poem, not too long not too short. and your words flow so well, it was all so smooth, though there were like pauses in between. hahas, they were meant to be!
i love your last stanza! it is so packed with emotions. awesome write, thanks for the entry. keep penning, and best wishes!
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