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Countdown.

Touched winter’s coldness
welcomed a friend’s voice
cursed an unseen face
found creativity inside me
fell out with technology.


Time went backwards today
Does God know ?
Felt a friends pain
from so far away.
Dark thoughts dark lines.


Reverie leading nowhere.
A friend smiles again
smile at her smile.
Remembers closeness of Christmas
does Christmas get presents ?


A heartbeat from death.
Voices of childhood
remembered with happiness
mixed with pain.
Where does tomorrow live ?


Laughter is very warming
on a cold day.
My muse sleeps
please wake up.
looking forwards, counting backwards.


Is rain Nature's teardrops ?
Saw people starving
stop the bloody fighting !!!
Unexpected vistor, feline variety.
Who invented inventors ?


Friends so far away
feel so close.
Brave people remembered.
Am I going nowhere ?
Only time will tell.


Guy Fawkes was innocent !
Laughter feels so good
more people should laugh.
Grew a year older.
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Rip it to pieces and point me in the right direction.

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  • piggyback
    November 14, 2008
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    I really enjoyed the "fell out with technology.", very creative and expressive. Also like the paradoxes you penned here. Very beautiful writing. Aww and was the last verse your birthday? 'Cause it sounds like it. In that case, happy belated birthday Thanks for your entry


  • AngelSeeker silver member
    October 29, 2008
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    It looks like your already headed there. The right direction I mean.