stupid fag
battered and broken
money made
in heels and tits
always just a caricature
noose upon my neck
suffocating
gasping for air
suicidal torture
love
asylum tamed
voices run a muck
seal the pact with devils
chitter chatter, breaking panes
sever my heart to death
alone
i fall broken
strings cut loose
marionette laying dead
suffocating on the fumes
Author notes
any criticism is find with me, good or bad; its just nice to hear what people think
A contest entry
- snippets of you by piggyback.
6000 points, ended November 17, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow, this looks so well put together that I wonder if you really wrote it in bits
Good imagery and internal rhyming. I like how raw it is and the title is awesome. Thanks for your entry.
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Good start. I look forward to reading more/
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