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Lotus Haiku

someone's third eye
gazing at the heavens:
a blooming lotus.

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Kurgle.

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  • Draig aine gold member
    November 22, 2008
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    oh yes

    a lovely write indeed


  • DogFish silver member
    November 2, 2008
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    and we gaze back transfixed
    lost in her beautious smile


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    October 26, 2008
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    Different indeed!!!!!!!  Best wishes in the contest!!!!!!


  • Freak-in-BlackJeans
    October 25, 2008

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    This is very interesting... which prompt did you use? I see no comparison or mention or reference to glass or water.

    But thank you for entering!!

    Good luck in the contest!

    Naoto

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