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Lunar Accessories

the moon

wears a gilded tiara:

dirty windows.

Author notes

Kurgle.

A contest entry

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  • just mercedes gold member
    November 1, 2008
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    Perfect aha! moment in this.


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    October 26, 2008

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    a different approach to this contest and very refreshing!!!!!!   Much imagination felt in this piece!!
    Best wishes in the contest!!!!!!!!


  • Freak-in-BlackJeans
    October 25, 2008

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    I love this, I love the last two lines, how they feel so gentle, yet so... real.

    I love it! Good luck in the contest!

    Naoto


  • Isabel Cult
    October 25, 2008
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    Perfect.