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Water

eases into any
albeit saying no
synchronize

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"kurgle"

A contest entry

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  • jacbgd2 gold member
    October 26, 2008

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    Quite different and extremely deep!!!!   This one took some imagination and deep thought!!! Best wishes in the contest!!!!!!!!


  • Freak-in-BlackJeans
    October 25, 2008

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    Very beautiful, very pretty!!!

    I like it!

    It took me a while to get the title and the haiku though.

    Good luck in the contest!

    Naoto