Light inside dark
Would wrap its arms again
Around anyone who needs it
As the mist torments the dark outside with cold
Just a moment of care
Would bring gratuitous supplication
A moment of rest in our world
Is a treasured time
In the golden light of an embrace
For any length of duration
I will let relexation take over
Because God is the only one who knows
What people need after all
I will now gaze in longing
To my heart's content
In the golden field
Of the coelescence of energy
So now I rest in His warmth again
Until the crimson sun breaks upon the horizon
A contest entry
- Fresh As A Flower (No Prewrites) by HereComesTheSun.
450 points, ended October 26, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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great word choice here i mean it truly brings the poem to life
great work -
The last two lines truly lingered in my mind. wonderfully expressed.
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