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Lily Pond.

Water lily blooms
Petals touched with white; silk smooth
Surrounding tranquil

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Kurgle

A contest entry

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  • DogFish silver member
    November 2, 2008
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    -very nice!


  • Freak-in-BlackJeans
    October 25, 2008
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    I love this! Very nice, very pretty, and I like the title too.

    Good luck in the contest!

    Naoto

  • Freak-in-BlackJeans
    October 25, 2008

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    I'm sorry, but you have not followed the rules. This is very nice, but you have one day to read and edit this haiku so as to follow my rules. Please and thank you!


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    October 25, 2008

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    Ah, the good old haiku's

    I like how this paints such a pretty picture; especially with the last line "Surrounding tranquil"

    Very nicely written, good luck with your entry!
    Claire x