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MY New Life

i love my freedom.
I felt like a bird spreading my wings in this beautiful world.
I left them to live alone.
They left me,too. That's why I'm here.

I hate boredoms.
I hate to be alone.
But I don't have a choice.

All I can do every time I wake up is to write a poem,
or listen to a love song,
read a novel,
text 'till i fall asleep
and crave for all poetry.

And before i sleep,
i talk to myself,
play with my neighbor's cats and dogs,
make fun with the cockroaches and rats in my room,
Look at the ceiling,
count the stars,
and stare at the moon.
And most of all,
I cannot sleep without visiting Allpoetry.
and that's it.

This is my new life now.
This is my new family.

Author notes

These are the things I usually do, I love my independence but I hate to be alone. It's too sad to be. Thanks for AP!

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  • Mickie27
    November 6, 2008

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    What a heart felt poem that reminds us how sad and lonely it is to live alone. This poem flows perfectly and is very well expressed written in such a way I can relate. Good luck in the contest.


    • ishelicious
      November 7, 2008
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      thanks Mickie i appreciate your comment. i really hate to be alone. but i always left alone. and it's so sad.

  • Judith Chandler
    October 27, 2008

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    Being alone does its depressing moments. I like you honesty. Playing with the rats and cockroaches made me sit up and take notice.

    Thank you for entering my contest.

    • ishelicious
      November 7, 2008
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      thanks for your comments, its true everytime im alone here in my room, there is nobody here but rats and cockroaches,


  • ishelicious
    October 27, 2008
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    thanks oldschool. dont worry i am glad for your comments. it's all worth it


  • hks
    October 26, 2008
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    oh wow. i dont even have enough points to applaud.. lol


  • hks
    October 26, 2008
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    dont worrry,
    so far your awesome.

    much love,
    oldschool

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