I've been a very dirty girl
dancing on this pole
take me home, tie me up
put me under your control
Pretty as a Pornstar
Slutty as a Co-Ed
tease me and make me wet
Let me give you head
My mouth will captivate your flesh
and enliven every nerve
electricity from my lips
will stimulate every curve
A contest entry
- Calling All Hornballs ~ Come & Get Your Quickie Here (ADULT ONLY) by StormGoddess.
400 points, ended November 2, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Someone's got the right pole in mind. (I did say calling all horn balls, right?) Yep, fits thr prompt. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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Wow nice....
Erotic poetry should stir a man and this pirate felt this 1 deeply. hehehe give me a call....
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This is an awsome poem...
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Well done with this prompt!
Good luck to you in this contest and
thanks for sharing it here!
Jeremy0826 -
finally- one thats talented and erotic. so many of these are just awful!
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ohhh yummy
Wow just skating through poems and I'm glad I found this one. Dirty, yummy, and just a hint of very erotic innocence -
Wow...
Virility...
livliness...
lust...
satire...
pleasure...
seduction...
bondage...
submission...
sexual control...
wetness...flowing of juices...
dirty activities...
sin...
erotic dance...
mouth work...
stimulation...
meeting a 'porn star'...
and bla...bla...
all in one capsule...
BRILLIANT!
You deserve erotic kisses!
Galaxy2
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A good write this is hon
Good luck in the contest!
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deeply dirty
very straight and down and sexy with stimulating words,,good luck in the contest sweetie,,,blessings of light,life,laughter and love..Firestorm
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excellent
And because I think he was inventing on every couplet, his sonnets strike me as essentially true.
When the questions How much of this really happened? and How close is what the poet says happened to what really happened? don't have to be asked, then naturally their possible answers don't pop up to complicate your enjoyment of a poem. Poets are born liars and aren't known for worrying about getting their facts straight when a rhyme or a metaphor is at stake. The answers to those questions are almost certainly Not much and Not very and once the lies are on the table it's hard to care about the poetry.
Back in Shakespeare's day it was assumed poets were making it up. Even when the circumstances of a poem seemed to match the circumstances of the poet's life the poem's audience wasn't expected to think that the speaker of the poem and the poet were the same person.
Poets depended on readers making this distinction, particularly aristocratic readers with legal authority and whimsical ideas about freedom of the press, to keep themselves out of prison and away from the block.
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